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Unread Feb 6th, 2008, 07:39 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Originally Posted by d A n i View Post
For a moment I could smell the air
But each time I am close
Another wave comes to push me back down
And I begin struggling again
If I must hurt
Hurt me now and never again

d A n i
I've quoted the bits I like best, especially the latter quote.
A very effectively communicative poem.
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