The What Are You Currently Working On Thread! - Page 90

krazykhalid · Oct 27th, 2009, 09:01 AM

heres another one i whipped up solo this time, after a night of heavy insomnia.... infact i still haven't slept...
http://www.speedyshare.com/416908795.html

Xyz_39808 · Oct 27th, 2009, 11:45 AM

I think the depth of the violin vibratos at [1.39] are very unnatural. Lighten 'em up. Or if there isn't some sorta setting for getting it detailed, layer one version with and one without vibrato (that should fix it since it sounds like it's the kind of vibrato that affects amplitude only).

krazykhalid · Oct 27th, 2009, 07:17 PM

Changed the Timbre, also added some stuff and fixed the arrangement a bit

http://www.speedyshare.com/385313548.html

DJ_Serg · Oct 27th, 2009, 08:58 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Drigh

Track I did with vocalist Lea Luna... let me know what you think

http://soundcloud.com/jontron/leaving-for-mars-beta-1-2

das is perry sick

KrisM · Nov 18th, 2009, 11:12 AM

something with pads in the background, a thick droning bass, plucky lead, and a cool drum beat. It's coming along nicely.

And then something more stripped down.

And then an ambient track...

I sort of work on whichever one feels best at the time.

pudman_x · Nov 19th, 2009, 01:20 AM

started this tonight, not sure if I need to pull back on the reverb or not lol, mbbe a little, my fav part is after the makeshift breakdown

http://soundcloud.com/alex_p/zero-gravity

PhineasFreak · Nov 19th, 2009, 02:33 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by pudman_x

started this tonight, not sure if I need to pull back on the reverb or not lol, mbbe a little, my fav part is after the makeshift breakdown

it would be cool if the end of the breakdown was an upsweeping HPF so less and less bass/mids comes through, then a killer sub kicks in when you drop it all back for the next section...

FRENZ E · Nov 20th, 2009, 07:06 PM

wobble wobble wobble!!!!

E-Light · Nov 20th, 2009, 10:59 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by pudman_x

started this tonight, not sure if I need to pull back on the reverb or not lol, mbbe a little, my fav part is after the makeshift breakdown

http://soundcloud.com/alex_p/zero-gravity

Really like the atmosphere in this one not a fan of the percussions but oh weel taste i guess like everything else

but yeah slightly too much reeverb but still great one!

JustinMead · Nov 21st, 2009, 09:59 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by pudman_x

started this tonight, not sure if I need to pull back on the reverb or not lol, mbbe a little, my fav part is after the makeshift breakdown

http://soundcloud.com/alex_p/zero-gravity

love everything except the drums

pudman_x · Nov 21st, 2009, 01:32 PM

thanks guys, ya Im a bit iffy on the drums myself now, will have to go back and do alot of work on this track

JustinMead · Nov 25th, 2009, 09:40 PM

http://soundcloud.com/justinmead/jm-trinity-moons

dubstep influenced, experimental piece I'm working on.

digidoh · Jan 10th, 2010, 05:48 PM

Hi DI

I've got a trance track I've been working on here http://soundcloud.com/digidoh/e-01 and would like peoples feedback on it.

I havent finished with it yet, still needs a bit more percussion and FX, and to change a couple sounds, especially that bell sound, sometimes it sounds like someone whistling lol. But overall I'm happy with it at the moment.

(I'll be submitting something else for the contest btw)

DJ_Serg · Jan 10th, 2010, 09:28 PM

Sounds good. I'd recommend fixing that bell sound too. It sounds a bit overwhelming in certain places and i noticed it on my tiny laptop speakers. Won't comment on anything else in terms of sound quality. Need better speakers for that

First breakdown is attempting to be epic but the beginning lead just cuts out with a crash before the buildup lead starts. I thought it's a little abrupt. Melody sounds a bit plain, but great for a first try. It's starting to get a little boring towards the end, though. Could try bringing new elements in. Maybe inserts some breaks when the track intensifies. Effects? Really, just anything to make it sound like the track is changing or evolving. Also, the end almost seemed like it was about to go into the main melody again. I think this would have been okay, if the the track wasn't so repetitious up to the breakdown.
Either way, a really good attempt. You definitely got the basics down. Just need to work with imagination

digidoh · Jan 11th, 2010, 07:25 AM

Thanks Serg

Yeah I realise its very basic and straightforward (hence the 'nothing fancy' in the description), I guess I'm just keeping it nice and easy for my own sake lol, and not over-complicating things making it difficult or overwhelming, ultimately leading to be discouraged, I know that everything will come in time. I just wanted to get one track "finished" to hopefully get the ball rolling, I have a folder full of bits and bobs that never go anywhere lol.

But its definitely something I'm going to work on, and all your comments have been taken on board, thanks again

DJ_Serg · Jan 12th, 2010, 09:12 PM

Here is something i threw together today. A 'rough draft'. Some aren't mastered and sound out of whack, but it's an interesting sound to me. I haven't approach any track in a minimalistic way before.

http://www.megaupload.com/?d=SOKB1HAS

Cemoa · Jan 19th, 2010, 08:24 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by DJ_Serg

Here is something i threw together today. A 'rough draft'. Some aren't mastered and sound out of whack, but it's an interesting sound to me. I haven't approach any track in a minimalistic way before.

http://www.megaupload.com/?d=SOKB1HAS

I'm not really too experienced in minimal to give you some real specific feedback, but I will say I definitely like it. It's got a real nice groove to it, very crisp and clear also. I'm intrigued, keep working on it and be sure to post the results here.

Digital Society · Jan 30th, 2010, 07:22 AM

Currently working on my 1st trance e.p for our label.

I never finish my tracks for some reason so im determined to finish 2 over the coming months. will post once have samples

Good thread btw

SaxxonPike · Feb 8th, 2010, 10:37 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Digital Society

Currently working on my 1st trance e.p for our label.

I never finish my tracks for some reason so im determined to finish 2 over the coming months. will post once have samples

Good thread btw

Yeah there's a lot of inspired works here

The Queenstons - What You Do (Sanxion7 Remix)
http://www.mediafire.com/?5xw2mi54vmz

Working on putting together a demo of sorts. Remixes are fun to do every once in a while though.

chisbu · Feb 10th, 2010, 07:02 AM

A Trance remix of Give In To Me. (Michael Jackson)

Oct 27th, 2009, 09:01 AM	#1781 (permalink)
krazykhalid Senior Forum Addict Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Afghanistanimation Posts: 999	heres another one i whipped up solo this time, after a night of heavy insomnia.... infact i still haven't slept... http://www.speedyshare.com/416908795.html __________________ www.myspace.com/khalidsarwarmusic

Oct 27th, 2009, 11:45 AM	#1782 (permalink)
Xyz_39808 DI Extreme Addict Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: South Texas Posts: 4,996	I think the depth of the violin vibratos at [1.39] are very unnatural. Lighten 'em up. Or if there isn't some sorta setting for getting it detailed, layer one version with and one without vibrato (that should fix it since it sounds like it's the kind of vibrato that affects amplitude only). __________________ e-hardcore of the Hookah-Clan Doctrine & Covenants Section 136: 28 If thou art merry, praise the Lord with singing, with music, with dancing, and with a prayer of praise and thanksgiving.

Oct 27th, 2009, 07:17 PM	#1783 (permalink)
krazykhalid Senior Forum Addict Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Afghanistanimation Posts: 999	Changed the Timbre, also added some stuff and fixed the arrangement a bit http://www.speedyshare.com/385313548.html __________________ www.myspace.com/khalidsarwarmusic

Nov 19th, 2009, 01:20 AM	#1786 (permalink)
pudman_x One Man Spaceship Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Canada Posts: 1,235	started this tonight, not sure if I need to pull back on the reverb or not lol, mbbe a little, my fav part is after the makeshift breakdown http://soundcloud.com/alex_p/zero-gravity __________________ " Revolutionary art is determined...by how much it revolutionises our thinking and imagination; overturning our preconceptions, bias and prejudice and inspiring us to change ourselves and the world " — Carl Craig

Nov 21st, 2009, 01:32 PM	#1791 (permalink)
pudman_x One Man Spaceship Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Canada Posts: 1,235	thanks guys, ya Im a bit iffy on the drums myself now, will have to go back and do alot of work on this track __________________ " Revolutionary art is determined...by how much it revolutionises our thinking and imagination; overturning our preconceptions, bias and prejudice and inspiring us to change ourselves and the world " — Carl Craig

Nov 18th, 2009, 11:12 AM	#1785 (permalink)
KrisM Junior Addict Join Date: Nov 2009 Location: DFW, TX USA Posts: 16	something with pads in the background, a thick droning bass, plucky lead, and a cool drum beat. It's coming along nicely. And then something more stripped down. And then an ambient track... I sort of work on whichever one feels best at the time.

Nov 20th, 2009, 07:06 PM	#1788 (permalink)
FRENZ E Junior Addict Join Date: Nov 2009 Location: U.S Posts: 17	wobble wobble wobble!!!!

Nov 25th, 2009, 09:40 PM	#1792 (permalink)
JustinMead DI Extreme Addict Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: right? Posts: 1,951	http://soundcloud.com/justinmead/jm-trinity-moons dubstep influenced, experimental piece I'm working on. __________________ ... so reduce your blood pressure and go get naked and have fun!!!!! -Lotz ... that's about as useful as a coal powered frog-violin -Phineas ... Oh, and it's probably not best to make use of your tongue straight away.- rh1n0

Jan 10th, 2010, 05:48 PM	#1793 (permalink)
digidoh DI Chronic Addict Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Doh up Posts: 7,308	A track I've been working on. Hi DI I've got a trance track I've been working on here http://soundcloud.com/digidoh/e-01 and would like peoples feedback on it. I havent finished with it yet, still needs a bit more percussion and FX, and to change a couple sounds, especially that bell sound, sometimes it sounds like someone whistling lol. But overall I'm happy with it at the moment. (I'll be submitting something else for the contest btw) __________________ All in good fun, no harm done. If you knew as much as you think you know, You would realize that you don't know what you thought you knew!

Jan 10th, 2010, 09:28 PM	#1794 (permalink)
DJ_Serg DI Extreme Addict Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: USA Posts: 4,517	Sounds good. I'd recommend fixing that bell sound too. It sounds a bit overwhelming in certain places and i noticed it on my tiny laptop speakers. Won't comment on anything else in terms of sound quality. Need better speakers for that First breakdown is attempting to be epic but the beginning lead just cuts out with a crash before the buildup lead starts. I thought it's a little abrupt. Melody sounds a bit plain, but great for a first try. It's starting to get a little boring towards the end, though. Could try bringing new elements in. Maybe inserts some breaks when the track intensifies. Effects? Really, just anything to make it sound like the track is changing or evolving. Also, the end almost seemed like it was about to go into the main melody again. I think this would have been okay, if the the track wasn't so repetitious up to the breakdown. Either way, a really good attempt. You definitely got the basics down. Just need to work with imagination __________________ The Sellex Project: http://www.sellexproject.com - You touch me, I feel you - Your presence surrounds me - I float away... - You are my guide, You are my light, You take me to a place where i can shine

Jan 11th, 2010, 07:25 AM	#1795 (permalink)
digidoh DI Chronic Addict Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Doh up Posts: 7,308	Thanks Serg Yeah I realise its very basic and straightforward (hence the 'nothing fancy' in the description), I guess I'm just keeping it nice and easy for my own sake lol, and not over-complicating things making it difficult or overwhelming, ultimately leading to be discouraged, I know that everything will come in time. I just wanted to get one track "finished" to hopefully get the ball rolling, I have a folder full of bits and bobs that never go anywhere lol. But its definitely something I'm going to work on, and all your comments have been taken on board, thanks again __________________ All in good fun, no harm done. If you knew as much as you think you know, You would realize that you don't know what you thought you knew!

Jan 12th, 2010, 09:12 PM	#1796 (permalink)
DJ_Serg DI Extreme Addict Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: USA Posts: 4,517	Here is something i threw together today. A 'rough draft'. Some aren't mastered and sound out of whack, but it's an interesting sound to me. I haven't approach any track in a minimalistic way before. http://www.megaupload.com/?d=SOKB1HAS __________________ The Sellex Project: http://www.sellexproject.com - You touch me, I feel you - Your presence surrounds me - I float away... - You are my guide, You are my light, You take me to a place where i can shine

Jan 30th, 2010, 07:22 AM	#1798 (permalink)
Digital Society Junior Addict Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: England Posts: 25	Currently working on my 1st trance e.p for our label. I never finish my tracks for some reason so im determined to finish 2 over the coming months. will post once have samples Good thread btw

Feb 10th, 2010, 07:02 AM	#1800 (permalink)
chisbu DI Chronic Addict Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: USA Posts: 6,674	A Trance remix of Give In To Me. (Michael Jackson) __________________ If you can't stand the heat, get out of the oven, and into the refridgerator.

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